A bit gawdy

A bit gawdy, sure, but I'm not backed off from it and I actually read this one. I wasn't interested at the end, but this isn't my thing really. But it could have been, if I was so inclined in schooling of a nature close to this one than I could have been sold with it. With a bit more value added propositioning I could have been sold were I absolutely neutral to the idea of schooling like this. I'm decided against it and would have had to been thrown deep into want with something extremely enticing to do it, real niche targetting.

Another plus point is in the command quality of before the switch, it set me up like a sucker. The switch as gone above before don't have enough real value added draw, but it could be said it doesn't quite impinge enough. If it had a bit more POP I think it would have it. But on the other hand the layout is good, I understood the time designations quickly and drew in to the Click Here button as a matter of course and with any inclination to that area again, between the logo and the button I would have been their next visitor.
Well that's what I thought atleast.